10 Minutes 38 Seconds in This Strange World by Elif Shafak
Published by Viking, 2019
My rating: ⭐ ⭐ ⭐
Reading this novel was an odd experience, in that I flipped between immensely enjoying it and finding it incredibly frustrating on multiple occasions. Put simply, it’s full of excellent themes, ideas, and characters, but the execution is almost uniformly clumsy, leaving me with the distinct impression that it’s a brilliant book trapped inside a good one.
The story is presented largely in two parts. In the first, Leila has just been murdered, and though her body has already shut down, her brain has precisely 10 minutes and 38 seconds of activity left, during which time she is able to revisit key memories from throughout her lifetime. At first, though a striking concept, this proved somewhat tedious. Not only do we have the main character recounting her own birth (a very specific pet peeve of mine), but these early scenes are described in excruciating, unnecessary detail, the author’s push for ‘beautiful’ writing awkwardly apparent. Once the narrative finds its focus, however, things really start to improve.
The bulk of Leila’s memories centre around why she became estranged from her birth family, and how she came to meet each of her five closest friends, who, like her, are all societal outcasts. In the novel’s second half, the focus shifts to these five friends as they attempt to claim Leila’s body for burial. Since none of them are blood relatives, they are refused, with Leila’s body destined for the Cemetery of the Companionless instead. As much as I loved Shafak’s commentary on the injustice of this, and her exploration of the power of found family, this section was also not without its flaws. Firstly, though each character is interesting in their own right, the group feels ragtag to the point of caricature, and prior to Leila’s death, we see little to no interaction between them as a combined group. This makes it hard to buy them as a united front straight away. Secondly, their attempts to reclaim Leila’s body and give her a proper funeral – though compellingly readable and full of heartfelt intention – err dangerously close to farce, with the latter section of the book reading strangely like a slapstick buddy flick at times.
That said, there are consistently moments of excellence throughout. I love the way the group navigate the diversity of religious and political beliefs amongst them. There’s a particularly brilliant exchange between a devout believer and a non-believing transgender character. The former puts little stock into what happens to Leila’s body, believing the importance lies in setting her soul free, while the latter, who has had to fight her whole life to craft the body she desires, feels quite the opposite. It’s in these quieter, nuanced explorations of difference, tolerance, and understanding that the book really shines.
I’m definitely glad I read this, as even when certain elements were exaggerated to the point of frustration, I remained invested in the overall narrative throughout. That has to speak for something. If Shafak’s style didn’t wholly work for me, I certainly admired the warmth, wisdom, and purpose behind her words.
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Beautiful review, Callum!! I love that you wrote “the execution is almost uniformly clumsy, leaving me with the distinct impression that it’s a brilliant book trapped inside a good one”, it expressed how I feel about this book perfectly. It’s a wonderful idea but the execution… uhm. Have you read other books by the author? I was thinking of picking up another, but her writing style put me off a little. Also, characters remembering their own births will never not be a scene I want to skip and that adds nothing at all to the story.
Thank you so much, Naty! 😊 I’m glad I wasn’t alone with this one. It’s always frustrating when excellent ideas are held back by lacklustre execution.
I haven’t read anything else by the author either. I may give her another shot at some point, but I can’t say I feel compelled to rush out and grab another one right away after this.
And thank goodness you agree about characters remembering their own births! It’s such a specific pet peeve, but it always irks me!
I also agree with you on all your points, especially on Shafak’s “push for beautiful writing”. She tried so obviously to please with her “beautiful” writing and “important” messages, and make her book feel “significant”, but all her intentions were just too obvious for me and I especially agree with you about her characters appearing a caricature as a group.
I did read one other book by the author – “The Architect’s Apprentice” and I suffered through it. It wasn’t good and too superficial for my taste, and frankly – a mishmash of different things, with the author, yet again, trying to make her book grandiose “Arabian Tales” by including all the expected messages. Having said that, I have to admit that, if I were an 11 year old girl, it would probably have been my favourite book.
Perhaps she just won’t be an author for me then. She undoubtedly has some great ideas and intentions, but as you said, she lacks a certain level of subtlety when it comes to execution.
Great review! Sounds intriguing but not for me.
Thanks!
Wonderful review, Callum. You articulated what worked and didn’t work for you quite well. I was struck by your description of the excruciating detail of scenes making apparent her “push for beautiful writing”. I’m reading an earlier work of hers, “Three Daughters of Eve” (2017), and your sentiment is still apt—she has a tendency to overwrite. Still, I’m liking the novel itself so far. I’m glad you still ended up being invested in the story despite its flaws. 🙂
Thank you, Gil 😊 I’ll certainly keep an eye out for your full thoughts on that one once you’ve finished it!
Shafak is one of those writers I would like to like, but never will – 10 Minutes 38 Seconds, in particular, struck me as sentimental, and you’re absolutely right about the tonal disconnect of the buddy-flick second section.
That’s definitely how I felt about this one; I wanted to like it but the clumsy execution was always keeping me at a distance.
It lost me here: “Not only do we have the main character recounting her own birth” – WHY do authors do this?!?!?! I also find the book’s central concept incredibly uninteresting, which is why I never felt compelled to reach for this one during Booker season – I just can’t get behind these ‘in the moments before they die’ books. Crossing my fingers that I will not have to read this for the WP.
Thankfully I was able to appreciate some of its merits despite its obvious flaws, but my gut tells me you really wouldn’t enjoy it, so fingers crossed for your sake it isn’t longlisted! lol
Hmm, this sounds disappointing. I had high hopes for this one. I loved your review, though, and now I have the mental image stuck in my head of the brilliant book inside, struggling to get out! 😉 Most likely, I will still read this one, perhaps with more realistic expectations now.
I’d be very intrigued to hear your thoughts! Lots of people love Shafak’s style, so perhaps you’ll have better luck with this than I did. 😊
Great review! I loved how you described it as a brilliant book trapped in a good one.
Thank you! It’s always a frustrating feeling when you find such a book.
It is. Though it can make it extra rewarding to read that author’s next book and find that they’re able to release that brilliant book!
Very true! And she’s a popular author, so her style must work well for some.
“A brilliant book trapped inside a good one” is the BEST description for this story! I didn’t mind the birth part so much because I had the impression that Leila was recounting what she’d been told rather than what she supposedly remembered, but now that you mention it, I’m less sure. I agree wholeheartedly with all of your other criticisms. There were certainly things I loved about the book as well, but the writing weighed it down. I think I fared a little better for having seen so many disappointed reviews before starting, and I ended up pleasantly surprised that I didn’t actively hate the book, but I still wasn’t fully convinced. Excellent review! 🙂
Thank you! 😊 I’m glad it worked a little better for you. The book certainly has its merits, and I’m glad to have read it.
I completely understand being frustrated with a book that has such potential, but clumsy execution! I’m glad that in the end you were still happy you read it. There’s nothing worse than trudging through that rollercoaster and thinking “… That’s IT?!”
Exactly! At least this one had enough redeeming features to make it worthwhile 😊
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My thoughts exactly. I love the way Shafak talks of Turkey, Istanbul. I loved the way she brought alive Leila’s character. However, I wish she’d invested more in the other characters and their bonding. They never could come together as a group. Also Part II was SUCH a let down. ‘Slapstick’ is the perfect word to describe it.
I’m glad it wasn’t just me who felt so.