5 comments on “Reminder to Breathe

  1. Powerful. Great poem and intro lines.
    Better to feel the bite of cold worrying my skin
    than the panic that frays my edges
    and tries to break me every single day.
    I’ve had daydreams of the easy way out
    and nightmares of eternity,
    that’s why survival is a victory and
    breathing is the only way to heal. – that part really resonated, real writing.

  2. I agree. This is a powerful, gripping and hauntingly beautiful poem – they all resonate, but then that’s the power of your work. I loved the flow if it, and the imagery it conveys 🙂

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