9 comments on “Obsession / Repression

  1. Great piece. The repetition was great and the following stanza really stood out:
    Do you know what it is to be burned by your own blood?
    Crushed by your own ribcage?
    A plaything for your own mind?
    I hope you don’t.
    I wish I didn’t.

  2. I agree with Mel, Callum. This is one of your best. I’ve been reading an anthology of poems and short stories and “Obsession/Repression” is a lot better than a lot of what I’ve read.

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